Gatsby is dead!
BREAKING NEWS: Gatsby is dead! The man known for his extensive and elaborate parties was shot in a homicide yesterday. He was killed by a man named George Wilson. Gatsby was found in his pool, which he was enjoying on its last day open, his butler reported. Wilson's body was found a few feet away from Gatsby's -- with a bullet through his head. Forensic scientists declared the gun belonged to Wilson this morning.
His motives were also identified this morning: Wilson had lost his wife the evening previous in a car accident. His wife, Myrtle, was killed in a graphic accident where her body was torn apart. A mysterious yellow car was seen crash into her, but did not stop. The car was later identified as Jay Gatsby's by a man named Tom Buchanan. Once Wilson discovered this, he took his gun and disappeared. He was found late afternoon, dead with Gatsby. No longer will the great Gatsby through enormous parties on the West Egg. The funeral was a small and private affair, not at all what we would expect from a man like Jay Gatsby.
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His motives were also identified this morning: Wilson had lost his wife the evening previous in a car accident. His wife, Myrtle, was killed in a graphic accident where her body was torn apart. A mysterious yellow car was seen crash into her, but did not stop. The car was later identified as Jay Gatsby's by a man named Tom Buchanan. Once Wilson discovered this, he took his gun and disappeared. He was found late afternoon, dead with Gatsby. No longer will the great Gatsby through enormous parties on the West Egg. The funeral was a small and private affair, not at all what we would expect from a man like Jay Gatsby.
Statement of Purpose: On this piece of writing I focused on eliminating unnecessary words and phrases. Also, I focused on organization and ideas.